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Here is a map. You can see the development of a village

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The map illustrates the development of a urban area in various features in the term of 1995 and present. Overall, Farmland have been changed in present and become a golf center. Then forest park also changed and become a tennis. It is clear that the present have lots of development, if we compared the present with past. First of all, it is seemed that there have 2 house increased in present. Afterwards, Shop became restaurants, and fish market become housing in these term. However, whole the fishing port changed into sea. On the other hand, It is amazing that cafe is still unchanged. Morever, there is a car park invented in the hotel. Finally, we can see that a lots of changed in this map.
The map illustrates the development of
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a
urban area in various features in the term of 1995 and
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present
.
Overall
, Farmland have been
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changed
in
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present
and become a golf center. Then forest park
also
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changed
and become a tennis. It is
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clear
that the
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present
have lots of development, if we compared the
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present
with past.
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First of all
, it
is seemed
that there have 2
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house
increased in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
present
. Afterwards, Shop became restaurants, and fish market become housing in these term.
However
, whole the fishing port
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changed
into sea.
On the other hand
, It is amazing that
'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"
cafe
is
still
unchanged.
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Morever
, there is a car park invented in the hotel.
Finally
, we can
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see
that
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a lots
of
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changed
in this map.
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IELTS academic Here is a map. You can see the development of a village

Academic
  American English
1 paragraphs
125 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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