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he maps depict the redevelopment done on an island for the ease of visitors.

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The maps depict the redevelopment done on an island for the ease of visitors. Overall, it clearly evident that western side of the land was changed drastically whereas eastern part remains more or less the same. Although the beach is the only point which remains untouched in western direction. Looking into the details, the empty space was utilized and handful of accommodation were created and there were connected with footpath trail in oppose to that the plant was untouched. Moreover, the connection was established between pier, reception and restaurant with the vehicle track. On the other hand, the only beach on the island faced no changed only it was connected via footpath and presently it is used by the visitors for the swimming purpose.
The maps depict the redevelopment done on an island for the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
ease
of visitors.

Overall
, it
clearly
evident that western side of the land was
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changed
drastically
whereas eastern part remains more or less the same.
“Although” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Although
the beach is the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
point which remains untouched in western direction.

Looking into the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
details
, the empty space
was utilized
and handful of accommodation
were created
and there
were connected
with footpath trail in oppose to that the plant
was untouched
.
Moreover
, the connection
was established
between pier, reception and restaurant with the vehicle
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
track
.

On the other hand
, the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
beach on the island faced no
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changed
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
it
was connected
via footpath and
presently
it is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
by the visitors for the swimming purpose.

IELTS academic he maps depict the redevelopment done on an island for the ease of visitors.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
124 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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