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he maps below show the sites of a school in 2013 and the planned one in 2016. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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Two maps illustrate the site of a particular school site in 2013 and a project in 2016. It is clearly that the school has been renovated significantly with many more facilities, although some features still kept the same as the original. Initially, this school had a capacity of 600 students. On the west side of the school, there was a car park whilst on the East, there is a round playground. Furthermore, there were two buildings between these two sites. In regard to the project in 2016, it is noticeable that the school now has one more building and a new car park placed at the old playground. Consequently, the playground had moved down to East West, under the new car park and had been reshaped as a rectangle. Additionally the new building is placed next to the new parking area on the left hand. Therefore, the capacity of the school is now up to 1000 students.

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significantly
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many
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some
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This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retained
kept
 the same as the original.

Initially
, this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinstituteacademyuniversityhalljailfaculty
school
 had a capacity of 600 students. On the west side of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinstituteacademyuniversityhalljailfaculty
school
, there was a car park whilst on the East, there is a round playground. Furthermore
, there were two buildings between these two sites.

In regard to the project in 2016, it is noticeable that the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinstituteacademyuniversityhalljailfaculty
school
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 has one more building and a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
 car park placed at the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
 playground. Consequently
, the playground had This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocated
moved
 down to East West, under the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
 car park and had been reshaped
 as a rectangle. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Additionally,
Additionally
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
 building is placed
next
 to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
 parking area on the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 hand. Therefore
, the capacity of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinstituteacademyuniversityhalljailfaculty
school
 is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 up to 1000 students. 