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The charts show the number of international students in the USA by subject and by country.

The charts show the number of international students in the USA by subject and by country. ob08D
The provided line graphs illustrate the number of international students in the USA by 5 subjects and 11 different regions during a span of 4 years since 2000. Overall, it is clear that the data on students who came from India, China, Korea, and Japan was higher than that of Canada, Taiwan, Mexico, Turkey, Thailand, and Indonesia. Additionally, business and management, engineering, mathematics, and computing were selected by more students, compared to social science and life science. In 2000, the figure for India and Japan stood at 40, 000 which was approximately 8000 lower than Japan and 15, 000 lower than China. However, after 4 years, the number of students from India dramatically rose to nearly 80, 000, while the opposite trend was true for Japan (dropped to 40, 000 in 2004). China and Korea gradually increase over the given time, recording around 60, 000 and 50, 000 respectively. In the 4-year period, Canada and Taiwan witnessed a slight fluctuation, meanwhile, Mexico, Turkey, Thailand, and Indonesia remained relatively unchanged. In 2004, there were around 25, 000 students who came from Canada and Taiwan, which approximately doubled the figure for Mexico, Turkey, Thailand, and Indonesia (at around 13, 000). The right-hand side of the provided chart by subject displays that the most popular subject was business and management with more than 100, 000 students. The next popular subject was engineering which reached 100, 000 in 2003 before a plummet to around 63, 000 in 2004, followed by mathematics and computing at nearly the same level as engineering (at 62, 000 in 2004). By 2000, the number of students who choose social science has been 40, 000 then noticeably soared to 56, 000 in 2004 while the figure for life science has been stayed relatively steady over the four years.
The provided line graphs illustrate the number of international
students
in the USA by 5
subjects
and 11
different
regions during a span of 4 years since 2000.

Overall
, it is
clear
that the data on
students
who came from India, China, Korea, and
Japan
was higher than that of Canada, Taiwan, Mexico, Turkey, Thailand, and Indonesia.
Additionally
, business and management, engineering, mathematics, and computing
were selected
by more
students
, compared to social science and life science.

In 2000, the figure for India and
Japan
stood at 40, 000 which was approximately 8000 lower than
Japan
and 15, 000 lower than China.
However
, after 4 years, the number of
students
from India
dramatically
rose to
nearly
80, 000, while the opposite trend was true for
Japan
(dropped to 40, 000 in 2004). China and Korea
gradually
increase over the
given
time, recording
around
60, 000 and 50, 000
respectively
. In the
4-year
period, Canada and Taiwan witnessed a slight fluctuation, meanwhile, Mexico, Turkey, Thailand, and Indonesia remained
relatively
unchanged. In 2004, there were
around
25, 000
students
who came from Canada and Taiwan, which approximately doubled the figure for Mexico, Turkey, Thailand, and Indonesia (at
around
13, 000).

The right-hand side of the provided chart by
subject
displays that the most popular
subject
was business and management with more than 100, 000
students
. The
next
popular
subject
was engineering which reached 100, 000 in 2003
before
a plummet to
around
63, 000 in 2004, followed by mathematics and computing at
nearly
the same level as engineering (at 62, 000 in 2004). By 2000, the number of
students
who choose social science has been 40, 000 then
noticeably
soared to 56, 000 in 2004 while the figure for life science has
been stayed
relatively
steady over the four years.
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