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This graph shows us the how much energy is consumed by men and women according to their age on average.

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This graph shows us the how much energy is consumed by men and women according to their age on average. Overall, Both men and women show similar tread but Men consumed alot more food then women in every stage of life. Furthermore, Both intake alot less energy during early childhood and in later years of their lives. For both men and women in the early stage of life, Within two to fifteen years, energy intake rises significantly from 7000 kilojoules to 13000 kilojoules and 6000 kilojoules to 9000 kilojoules respectively. After that is a steady decline in nutrition intake of both genders over a period of 50 years between age 15 and age 65. Where, women experience a decline of 2000 kilojoules; Men see a decline of 3000 kilojoules. Moreover, the difference between the energy consumption of men and women at all times is atleast 1000 kilojoules and almost 3000 kilojoules.
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