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The chart below gives information about internet use in Queensland,Australia,in 2001.

The chart below gives information about internet use in Queensland, Australia, in 2001. GLkl2
The given column graph illustrates the data of Queensland, Australia's internet users and non users in 2001. Overall, we can see from the graph that, whose age was 20 to 29, was the highest number of internet users and whose age was 60+ was the lowest number of non users of internet. According to the chart, about 98000 people were use imternet and their age was 0 to 9, while 400000 people did not use internet at that time and their was same. On the other hand, around 550000 people were use internet and their age was 20 to 29 which is extremely higher, however approximately 95000 people like to use internet and their age was 60 above, which is very lower. Though, a higher number of people whose age was 60+ like to use internet and their number was about 550000. On the other hand, whose age was 10 to 19 years old did not like to use internet and their number was only 310000.
The
given
column graph illustrates the data of Queensland, Australia's internet
users
and non
users
in 2001.
Overall
, we can
see
from the graph that, whose
age
was 20 to 29, was the highest
number
of internet
users
and whose
age
was 60+ was the lowest
number
of non
users
of internet. According to the chart, about 98000
people
were
use
imternet
and their
age
was 0 to 9, while 400000
people
did not
use
internet at that time and
their
was same.
On the other hand
, around 550000
people
were
use
internet and their
age
was 20 to 29 which is
extremely
higher,
however
approximately 95000
people
like to
use
internet and their
age
was 60 above, which is
very
lower. Though, a higher
number
of
people
whose
age
was 60+ like to
use
internet and their
number
was about 550000.
On the other hand
, whose
age
was 10 to 19 years
old
did not like to
use
internet and their
number
was
only
310000.
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