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The chart below gives information about internet use in Queensland,Australia,in 2001.

The chart below gives information about internet use in Queensland, Australia, in 2001. GLkl2

The given column graph illustrates the data of Queensland, Australia's internet users and non users in 2001. Overall, we can see from the graph that, whose age was 20 to 29, was the highest number of internet users and whose age was 60+ was the lowest number of non users of internet. According to the chart, about 98000 people were use imternet and their age was 0 to 9, while 400000 people did not use internet at that time and their was same. On the other hand, around 550000 people were use internet and their age was 20 to 29 which is extremely higher, however approximately 95000 people like to use internet and their age was 60 above, which is very lower. Though, a higher number of people whose age was 60+ like to use internet and their number was about 550000. On the other hand, whose age was 10 to 19 years old did not like to use internet and their number was only 310000.

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