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This line graph demonstrate the amount of fish and meat ingestion from 1974 to 2004. Over the span of 25 years, it can be seen that fish was different from the others by remained steady. However, beef and lamp had a similar trend, due to they both diminished over a period of time. Beef fell from about 220 grams per person per week to around 110 grams per person per day. While lamb had been declined from 150 grams per person per day to just 75 grams per person per day during the same period. Furthermore, beef has a slightly different trend because it was dramatically rose from around 180 grams to 230 grams by 1982. While this was not happen to lamb, which has been sharply decreased from 1979 to 1981. Moreover, chicken was the highest trend. it differed from the other trends in the chart, because of the number and how it gradually increased over a period of time, and has been become the highest serving. In contrast, fish just had a slightly drop at 1979 and stayed stable over a period of time. In conclusion, chicken ended the period as the highest. On the other hand, beef and lamp were steeply decreased and fish was about remained constant. Fish was the most intrigues trend, because it didn’t change a lot as the other trends
This line graph demonstrate the amount of fish and meat ingestion from 1974 to 2004.
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the span of 25 years, it can be
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seen
that fish was
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different
from the others by remained steady.

However
,
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beef
and lamp had a similar
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trend
, due to they both diminished
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over
a
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period
of time.
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Beef
fell from about 220
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grams
per
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person
per week to around 110
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grams
per
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person
per day.
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While
lamb had
been declined
from 150
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grams
per
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person
per day to
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just
75
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grams
per
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person
per day during the same period.

Furthermore
,
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beef
has a
slightly
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different
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trend
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because
it was
dramatically
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rose
from around 180
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grams
to 230
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grams
by 1982. While this was not
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happen
to lamb, which has been
sharply
decreased from 1979 to 1981.

Moreover
, chicken was the highest
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trend
.
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it
differed from the
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other
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trends
in the chart,
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because
of the number and how it
gradually
increased
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over
a
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period
of time, and has
been become
the highest serving.
In contrast
, fish
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just
had a
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slightly drop
at 1979 and stayed stable
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over
a
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period
of time.

In conclusion
, chicken ended the
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period
as the highest. On the
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other
hand,
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beef
and lamp were
steeply
decreased and fish was about remained constant. Fish was the most intrigues
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trend
,
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because
it didn’t
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change
a lot as the
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other
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trends
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IELTS academic Describe a line graph below

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5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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