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he line graph demonstrates the changes in the emissions of CO2 in four European countries from 1967 to 2007.

he line graph demonstrates the changes in the emissions of CO2 in four European countries from 1967 to 2007. ob3aw
The line graph compares the amount of carbon dioxide emissions each person in the United Kinged, Sweden, Italy and Portugal over a period of 40 years. It is clear that an individual in the United Kinged cause to produce carbon dioxide in metric tonnes. The lowest amount of CO2 emission in Portugal over the period shown. In 1967 average of carbon dioxide produced in Portugal was one in metric tonnes, which rose dramatically to peak of approximately five in metric tonnes in 1997 and remind in this level for the rest of period. By contrast, the highest average of co2 emissions by every person in 1967 was 11 in metric tonnes, although this amount fell over 40-year period, it stayed the top rank of generating co2 for whole the period. Figures of Sweden rose to peak of above ten in metric tonnes then it started to fall until 2007, when each person in Sweden and Portugal emission the same amount of co2, under six in metric tonnes. In 1967, the amount of co2 emissions in Italy was about four in metric tonnes but after 2 years it reached seven in metric tonnes and Italy over took Sweden by increasing amount of co2.
The line graph compares the
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each person in the United
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Kinged
, Sweden, Italy and Portugal
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a
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of 40 years.

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that an individual in the United
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Kinged
cause to produce carbon dioxide in metric tonnes. The lowest
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of CO2
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emission
in Portugal
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the
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period
shown.

In 1967 average of carbon dioxide produced in Portugal was one in metric tonnes, which rose
dramatically
to peak of approximately five in metric tonnes in 1997 and remind in this level for the rest of
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period
. By contrast, the highest average of co2
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emissions
by every person in 1967 was 11 in metric tonnes, although this
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amount
fell
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over
40-year
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period
, it stayed the top rank of generating co2 for whole the period.

Figures of Sweden rose to peak of above ten in metric tonnes then it
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started
to fall until 2007, when each person in Sweden and Portugal
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emission
the same
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amount
of co2, under six in metric tonnes. In 1967, the
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amount
of co2
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emissions
in Italy was about four in metric tonnes
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after 2 years it reached seven in metric tonnes and Italy
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took Sweden by increasing
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amount
of co2.
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IELTS academic he line graph demonstrates the changes in the emissions of CO2 in four European countries from 1967 to 2007.

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