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The diagram illustrates how matchsticks are manufactured. Overall, the process of making these small burning sticks is complex; the initial step is to cutting veneer from a block of wood and mix it with chemicals. At this stage, wood is peeled off with a peeler with a blade, also known as veneer. A chopper slice this layer into small pieces. Afterward, ammonium phosphate soak and a round-shaped dryer dry these match sticks. Apart from that, the Second stage is mainly about storage. Match sticks are deposited in the hopper by the dryer. This hopper is connected to a blower. So, the blower blows the sticks into a storage area by way of a metal duct. In the storage area, all matches are put to rest before initiating the packaging procedure. following this, gathered sticks are placed in a vessel-like container. Next, the vessel releases matchsticks from one edge and inserts the stick into holes along the long belt, and proceeds to stick further. Three different chemicals were used to dip these pieces. Pack of these flammable matchsticks is ready for use.

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. Overall
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to cutting
 veneer from a block of wood and mix it with chemicals.

At this stage, wood is peeled
 off with a peeler with a blade, also
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small
 pieces. Afterward, ammonium phosphate soak and a round-shaped dryer dry these match sticks.

Apart from that, the Second stage is mainly
 about storage. Match You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwedgebatcanebarwandclub
sticks
are deposited
 in the hopper by the dryer. This hopper is connected
 to a blower. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
, the blower blows the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwedgebatcanebarwandclub
sticks
 into a storage area by way of a metal duct. In the storage area, all matches are put
 to rest This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 initiating the packaging procedure.

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following
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sticks
are placed
 in a vessel-like container. Next
, the vessel releases matchsticks from one edge and inserts the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwedgebatcanebarwandclub
stick
 into holes along the long belt, and proceeds to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwedgebatcanebarwandclub
stick
further
. Three This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 chemicals were This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to dip these pieces. Pack of these flammable matchsticks is ready for This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
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