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The diagram illustrates the various stages involved in making matches. Overall, the matchsticks are cut, prepared, dried, and passed through the storage area which is later treated with some chemicals before being packed

The diagram illustrates the various stages involved in making matches. Overall, the matchsticks are cut, prepared, dried, and passed through the storage area which is later treated with some chemicals before being packed gGM7D
The diagram illustrates the various stages involved in making matches. Overall, the matchsticks are cut, prepared, dried, and passed through the storage area which is later treated with some chemicals before being packed. At first, the log of wood is peeled using a peeler until a thin layer of the sheet comes out, called veneers. The chopper cuts these thin layer sheets into small sticks which are later soaked in an ammonium phosphate tank. The sticks are placed in a circular dryer and rotated in a rotating drum. Afterward, they are dumped into a hopper and pushed through the metal duct by a blower. In the next stage, the matchsticks are gathered in a storage area from where they are arranged in a funnel. These matchsticks are inserted onto a perforated steel belt. As the belts move along, the tips of the matchsticks are dipped in a series of three tanks containing components such as paraffin wax, based chemicals, tip chemicals. Next, the belts loop up and down through a drying area. In the final step of the process, the matches are packaged.
The diagram illustrates the various stages involved in making matches.
Overall
, the matchsticks are
cut
, prepared, dried, and passed through the storage area which is later treated with
some
chemicals
before
being packed
.

At
first
, the log of wood
is peeled
using a peeler until a thin layer of the sheet
comes
out, called veneers. The chopper
cuts
these thin layer sheets into
small
sticks which are later soaked in an ammonium phosphate tank. The sticks
are placed
in a circular dryer and rotated in a rotating drum. Afterward, they
are dumped
into a hopper and pushed through the metal duct by a blower.

In the
next
stage, the matchsticks
are gathered
in a storage area from where they
are arranged
in a funnel. These matchsticks
are inserted
onto a perforated steel belt. As the belts
move
along, the tips of the matchsticks
are dipped
in a series of three tanks containing components such as paraffin wax, based chemicals, tip chemicals.
Next
, the belts loop up and down through a drying area. In the final step of the process, the matches
are packaged
.

IELTS academic The diagram illustrates the various stages involved in making matches. Overall, the matchsticks are cut, prepared, dried, and passed through the storage area which is later treated with some chemicals before being packed

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