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the cycle of life of a silkworm in nature and the process of making silk cloth

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The diagram represents the cycle of life of a silkworm in nature and the process of making silk cloth The process of producing silkcloth involves six steps from cocoon to cloth. There is also four main stages in the life of a silkworm. At the start of the cycle an adult moth lays it's egg on mulberry leaves. Approximately 10 days later the egg hatched into silkworm larvae and then they feed on the leaves they were laid on. Following 4 to 6 weeks eating leaves the surviving larvae cover itself into a silk cocoon. A full silk cocoon takes between 3 and eight days. The first step of silk production involves taking a full cocoon and then boils in in water. The silk thread that makes up the cocoon is unwound and then several strands of thread are twisted together. After boiling and twisting the threads it can be dyed and woven into fabric or vice versa
The diagram represents the cycle of life of a silkworm in nature and the process of making
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silk
cloth

The process of producing
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silkcloth
involves six steps from
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cocoon
to cloth. There is
also
four main stages in the life of a silkworm.

At the
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of the cycle an adult moth lays
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egg on mulberry
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leaves
. Approximately 10 days later the egg hatched into silkworm
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larvae and
then they feed on the
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leaves
they
were laid
on. Following 4 to 6 weeks eating
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leaves
the surviving larvae cover itself into a
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silk
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cocoon
. A full
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silk
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cocoon
takes between 3 and eight days.

The
first
step of
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silk
production involves taking a full
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cocoon
and then boils
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in in
water. The
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silk
thread that
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makes
up the
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cocoon
is unwound and then several strands of thread
are twisted
together. After boiling and twisting the threads it can
be dyed
and woven into fabric or vice
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IELTS academic the cycle of life of a silkworm in nature and the process of making silk cloth

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157 words
6.0
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