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Travel to and from school

Travel to and from school PWJaB

The chart below illustrates how many children in a country from 1990 to 2010 travelled to and from school by using various types of transportation vehicles. In the beginning of the period, walking was the most favoured option while 20 years later a majority of children preferred walking. In 1990, just over 12 million children went to school and came back by walking which was the most popular method at the time. In contrast to that, being a car passenger was the least picked option by only slightly more than 4 million children choosing to travel so. The number of children who favoured other travelling ways such as cycling walking and bus and taking a bus flactuated from approximately 6 million to 7 million. In contrast to that, students aged between 5 to 12 chose being a car passenger as their most favoured option in 2010. Oppose to that; walking, cycling, walking and bus and taking a bus all fell dramatically over two decades.

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 in a country from 1990 to 2010 travelled to and from school by using various types of transportation vehicles.

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 from approximately 6 million to 7 million.

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 option in 2010. Oppose to that; walking, cycling, walking and bus and taking a bus all fell dramatically
 over two decades. 