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is there advantage or disadvantage of Bowen Island

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These pie charts depict the result of the fundamental features and the drawbacks of Bowen Island according to views of the visitors. It is clear from the graph that there are contrary on views related to the island. According to what is shown, People are the main feature regarding the most common positive sides of visitng the Island at 42 percent while the increse of the cost in Bowen was on of the reasone why tourists dislike the Island at exactly half. The wonderful views the Island ranked in the second of the most things that attracted people. Moreover, about quarter (25%) of tourists agreed that the lack of entertainment inside the city was one of the difficulties that oversease tourists faced. On the other hand, the good accommodation and culture does not comprised much proportion as it accounts for only 11 percent and 12 percent respectively in terms of the upsides of the Island, the same for the dowsides as only10 % and 15 % of visitors complained about the quality of food and the weather. To sum up, we could say that the advantages of Bowen outweight the disadvantage.
These pie charts depict the result of the fundamental features and the drawbacks of Bowen
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Island
according to views of the visitors. It is
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from the graph
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there
are contrary on views related to the island.

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are the main feature regarding the most common
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sides of
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at 42 percent while the
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of the cost in Bowen was on of the
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reasone
why tourists dislike

the
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Island
at exactly half. The wonderful views the
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ranked in the second of the most things that attracted
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.
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, about quarter (25%) of tourists
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agreed
that the lack of entertainment inside the city was one of the difficulties that
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oversease
tourists faced.

On the other hand
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good
accommodation and culture does not
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comprised
much proportion as it accounts for
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11 percent and 12 percent
respectively
in terms of the upsides of the
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Island
, the same for the
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dowsides
as only10 % and 15 % of visitors complained about the quality of food and the weather.

To sum up, we could say that the advantages of Bowen
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outweight
the disadvantage.
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