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The pic chart below shows the main reason of agriculture land less productive in 1990

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The pic chart compares how agriculture land become les productive and main cause of it in the year of 1990. Overall, over grazing was one of the main problem of land degradation, while the least percentage of degradation was occurred by others in the given year. In terms of causes of less productions, Due to over grazing agriculture land lost their productivity was at 35, which was the largest factor of degradation. On the other hand, Over cultivation was another key factor of land less productive, for this reason of more cultivation at 28% of land damage their production capacity. For the remaining cause of less productive' at 30 of land lost growing capacity for deforestation. In addition, others various factor, which was at 7 % for agriculture land less productive in 1990.
The pic chart compares how agriculture
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productive and main cause of it in the year of 1990.

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degradation, while the least percentage of degradation
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lost their productivity was at 35, which was the largest factor of degradation.
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productive,
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of more cultivation at 28% of
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damage their production capacity.

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productive' at 30 of
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lost growing capacity for deforestation.
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productive in 1990.
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