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he chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after

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The given chart illustrates the proportion of where Anthropology students work after graduating particular university whereas the table demonstrates the wage of the graduates after working over 5 years. Overall, according to the pie chart, just over half of the proportion belonged to full-time work while the table shows that the vast number of employees worked in a government sector. As the pie chart suggests, most of the graduates attained the full-time work showing a bit more than a half of proportion(52%) whereas only 15% belonged to part-time work. In addition to this, the ratio showed that approximately 12% of graduates remained unemployed. Furthermore, the people who were occupied with full-time postgrad study and unknown had 8% equally. The least common sector among graduated anthropologists was part-time work+postgrad study (5%). According to the salaries of anthropologists, half of them working for the government received a monthly payment above $100, 000. Nevertheless, only 5% of the wage of these employees sector was noticed between $25, 000-49, 999 as well as freelance consulatnts. Interesting to note, that both these categories demonstrated similar statistics between $50, 000-74, 999 too. Despite the fact that private companies had shown the biggest proportion in two initial categories (10% and 35%) in the remaining salaries as $75, 000 and 99, 999 it shoed the lowest contribution.
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of where Anthropology students
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work
after
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graduating
particular university whereas the table demonstrates the wage of the graduates after working over 5 years.

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, according to the pie chart,
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over half of the
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belonged to full-time
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work
while the table
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shows
that the vast number of employees worked in a
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government
sector.

As the pie chart suggests, most of the graduates attained the full-time
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work
showing a bit more than a half of
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proportion(52%)
whereas
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only
15% belonged to part-time
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work
.
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to this, the ratio
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showed
that approximately 12% of graduates remained unemployed.
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who
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study and unknown had 8%
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postgrad
study (5%).

According to the salaries of anthropologists, half of them working for the
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government
received a monthly payment above $100, 000.
Nevertheless
,
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only
5% of the wage of these employees sector
was noticed
between $25, 000-49, 999
as well
as freelance
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consulatnts
. Interesting to note, that both these categories demonstrated similar statistics between $50, 000-74, 999 too. Despite the fact that private
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companies
had shown the biggest
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proportion
in two initial categories (10% and 35%) in the remaining salaries as $75, 000 and 99, 999
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it shoed
the lowest contribution.
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