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GRANGE PARK BETWEEN 1920-PRESENT

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The Map illustrates the transformation of changes in park called as grange park between 1920- present. Overall, rapid changes depicted from the given map. Notable exceptions are very few, for instance rose garden which was located on upper left and the entrance both were remains same. Another rose garden from left upper side also a pond were removed and replaced with cafe and child's play area. Next was fountain which was located in the Centre of park turned into another rose garden and four seats arrangements were made each side of the park. Glass house redesigned as s water feature. At last musician stage converted into amphitheater. In overall the park has modified with new arrangements
The Map illustrates the transformation of
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changes
in
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park
called as grange
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park
between 1920- present.

Overall
, rapid
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changes
depicted from the
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given
map.

Notable exceptions are
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very
few,
for instance
rose garden which
was located
on upper
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left
and the entrance both were remains same.

Another rose garden from
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left
upper side
also
a pond
were removed
and replaced with
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cafe
and child's play area.

Next
was fountain which
was located
in the
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Centre
of
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park
turned into another rose garden and four seats arrangements
were made
each side of the park.

Glass
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house
redesigned as s water feature.

At last musician stage converted into amphitheater.

In
overall
the
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park
has modified with new arrangements

IELTS academic GRANGE PARK BETWEEN 1920-PRESENT

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8 paragraphs
115 words
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