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The table below shows the sales at a small restaurant in a downtown business district. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The table below shows the sales at a small restaurant in a downtown business district. jaLL
This table shows amount of money gained in a week of October from a small business in the city downtown. It is clear from the table that, restaurant's sales increased during evening specially during Friday's night. According to what is shown that during week days from Monday to Friday restaurant sale around 2, 300$ or more just for lunch meal. Moreover, lunch male sales decreased during weekend which become almost 1, 500 $. In other hand, people visit this small restaurant more during night for dinner which clearly shown from the sales. However, during weekdays night restaurant income more than 3, 600 %, and sales rocketed to its peak in the Friday night to be almost 4, 000$ just of dinner meal. In addition, sales get decreased during weekend to be around 2, 500$ or more. To sum up, we cloud say that restaurant income is stable during weekday and decreased during weekend. However, it reach the max during Friday night.
This table
shows
amount of money gained in a week of October from a
small
business in the city downtown. It is
clear
from the table that, restaurant's
sales
increased during evening
specially
during Friday's night.

According to what
is shown
that during week days from Monday to Friday
restaurant
sale
around 2,
300$
or more
just
for lunch meal.
Moreover
, lunch male
sales
decreased during weekend which become almost 1,
500 $
.

In other hand,
people
visit this
small
restaurant
more during
night
for dinner which
clearly
shown from the
sales
.
However
, during weekdays
night
restaurant
income more than 3, 600 %, and
sales
rocketed to its peak in the Friday
night
to be almost 4,
000$
just
of dinner meal.
In addition
,
sales
get
decreased during weekend to be around 2,
500$
or more.

To sum up, we cloud say that
restaurant
income is stable during weekday and decreased during weekend.
However
, it
reach
the max during Friday
night
.
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IELTS academic The table below shows the sales at a small restaurant in a downtown business district.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
161 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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