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Harrison's Stables in 1920 and in 2010.

Harrison's Stables in 1920 and in 2010. eAmNx
In 1920, Harrison's Stables started with a little barn next to the cottages and near their main house. The field was big and the riding path lead to a rode. Ninety years later, in 2010, stables are bigger and now the field has been replaced for the riding path which doesn't lead the road but a car park. This last thing is where the main house and cottages were used to be. The fence is shorter and is like under an office block! Something new too is a train line that cross from right to left above all Harrison's Stables.
In 1920, Harrison's Stables
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little
barn
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to the cottages and near their main
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house
. The field was
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big
and the riding path lead to a rode. Ninety years later, in 2010, stables are bigger and
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now
the field has
been replaced
for the riding path which doesn't lead the road
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but
a car park. This last thing is where the main
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house
and cottages were
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used
to be. The fence is shorter and is like under an office block! Something new too is a train line that cross from right to
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left
above all
Harrison's Stables.
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IELTS academic Harrison's Stables in 1920 and in 2010.

Academic
  American English
1 paragraphs
100 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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