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Today most people prefer to listen to music through streaming services, the most popular service is Spotify Spotify is a Swedish streaming service that was founded by Daniel Ek and Martin Lorentzon, Spotify started as a small start-up in Stockholm, Sweden. Daniel Ek and Martin Lorentzon developed the platform in 2006 as a response to the growing piracy problem the music industry was facing. Today serving about 200 million users worldwide and have a large library of 40 million songs. Spotify works by getting its content from major record labels as well as independent artists - and pays the artists, songwriters, and label royalties for streaming music
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