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Graphs shows export of pineapple, by the top three countries

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The bar chart illustrates exporting of pineapple throughout the world by the countries A, B and C, those are the top producers in 2009 and 2019 in millions metric tonnes. The pie chart depicts the price breakdown to the buyers of each pineapple in 2019. Overall, it can be seen from the bar chart that the export is maximum in country A in 2019 whereas in 2009 country B holds the same. In pie chart the highest proportion was represented by distribution and retail. As per the bar chart, in 2009, country B produced the largest amount of pineapple around 5 million metric tonnes while country C shows the lowest production in both the years, that is just under 1 million metric tonnes. However, there was a significant escalation in the pineapple farming by approximately 9 million metric tonnes over a decade. According to the pie chart, the major proportion of the cost was given to distribution and retail, which accounts over a third. Followed by profit(18%) and taxes, that is around 16%. In contrast, producer and export costs were the lowest recorded, which is almost 5 and 4% respectively.
The bar
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illustrates exporting of pineapple throughout the world by the
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countries
A, B and C, those are the top producers in 2009 and 2019 in
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millions
metric tonnes. The pie
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depicts the price breakdown to the buyers of each pineapple in 2019.

Overall
, it can be
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from the bar
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that the export is maximum in
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A in 2019 whereas in 2009
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B holds the same. In pie
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the highest proportion
was represented
by distribution and retail.

As per the bar
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, in 2009,
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B produced the largest amount of pineapple around 5
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million
metric tonnes while
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country
C
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the lowest production in both the years,
that is
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under 1
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million
metric tonnes.
However
, there was a significant escalation in the pineapple farming by approximately 9
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million
metric tonnes over a decade.

According to the pie
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, the major proportion of the cost was
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to distribution and retail, which accounts over a third. Followed by profit(18%) and taxes,
that is
around 16%.
In contrast
, producer and export costs were the lowest recorded, which is almost 5 and 4%
respectively
.
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