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Write a description of the changes made over the period.

Write a description of the changes made over the period. AJJ9n
The two maps show some changes of the shopping centre during the period between 1985 and 2005. It can be clearly seen that the basic shape of the centre is the same but there have been considerably alterations to the internal layout. We can see that the most noticeable modification has been to the remove of 6 large cinemas in the southeast of the centre and that area is now vacant. The third stall of the food stall has been removed and vacant on the shopping centre map in 2005. The fountain opposite the jewelry shop has been pull down. Bookstore between the woman’s clothing and sporting goods was removed. Similarly, the gift shop was also eliminated over the next 20 years. The shoe and video section has been converted into an electronics store. Although there have been many changes, the entrance of the center remains the same as before.
The two maps
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of the shopping
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centre
during the period between 1985 and 2005. It can be
clearly
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seen
that the basic shape of the
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centre
is the same
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there have been
considerably
alterations to the internal layout.

We can
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see
that the most noticeable modification has been to the remove of 6 large cinemas in the southeast of the
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centre
and that area is
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now
vacant.

The third stall of the food stall has
been removed
and vacant on the shopping
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centre
map in 2005. The fountain opposite the jewelry shop has been pull down.

Bookstore between the woman’s clothing and sporting
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goods
was removed
.
Similarly
, the gift shop was
also
eliminated over the
next
20 years. The shoe and video section has
been converted
into an electronics store.

Although there have been
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changes
, the entrance of the center remains the same as
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before
.
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