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Write a description of the changes made over the period.

Write a description of the changes made over the period. AJJ9n

The two maps show some changes of the shopping centre during the period between 1985 and 2005. It can be clearly seen that the basic shape of the centre is the same but there have been considerably alterations to the internal layout. We can see that the most noticeable modification has been to the remove of 6 large cinemas in the southeast of the centre and that area is now vacant. The third stall of the food stall has been removed and vacant on the shopping centre map in 2005. The fountain opposite the jewelry shop has been pull down. Bookstore between the woman’s clothing and sporting goods was removed. Similarly, the gift shop was also eliminated over the next 20 years. The shoe and video section has been converted into an electronics store. Although there have been many changes, the entrance of the center remains the same as before.

The two maps This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstrateportrayindicatedisplay
show
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 of the shopping Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
 during the period between 1985 and 2005. It can be clearly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 that the basic shape of the Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
 is the same This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 there have been considerably
 alterations to the internal layout.

We can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 that the most noticeable modification has been to the remove of 6 large cinemas in the southeast of the Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
 and that area is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 vacant.

The third stall of the food stall has been removed
 and vacant on the shopping Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
 map in 2005. The fountain opposite the jewelry shop has been pull down.

Bookstore between the woman’s clothing and sporting This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :productscommoditiesmerchandises
goods
was removed
. Similarly
, the gift shop was also
 eliminated over the next
 20 years. The shoe and video section has been converted
 into an electronics store.

Although there have been This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
, the entrance of the center remains the same as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
. 