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The chart below shows the proportion of divorce rate in Finland and Sweden from 2011 to 2015.

The chart below shows the proportion of divorce rate in Finland and Sweden from 2011 to 2015. obb7b
The rendered bar graph depicts information regarding the percentum of divorce level in two different nations between 2011 and 2015. In gist, an overall observation demonstrate that Finland followed the rising trend, whilst opposite trend was displayed by sweden. Both regions was having some fluctuations in the given time period. At a fleeting glance, it is immensely clear that the ratio of Finland's divorce rate was about 46% in the initial year, while it was declined to slightly more than 30% in the following year. In 2013, there was a steady incline in the proportion of approximately four percent. However, it was accounting around, 40% in the year 2014, and remained stable in the eventual year. Further scrutinizing the graph, as regards Sweden in 2011, the percentage of divorce rate was hovering between the range of 30 and 40%, whereas it was surged by around 4% in the subsequent year, and started following downward trend after 2012, which was witnessed to be almost 45% in the penultimate year, before reaching at the least ratio of 37%.
The rendered bar graph depicts information regarding the
percentum
of divorce level in two
different
nations between 2011 and 2015.

In gist, an
overall
observation demonstrate that Finland followed the rising trend, whilst opposite trend
was displayed
by
sweden
. Both regions
was
having
some
fluctuations in the
given
time period.

At a fleeting glance, it is
immensely
clear
that the ratio of Finland's divorce rate was about 46% in the initial
year
, while it
was declined
to
slightly
more than 30% in the following
year
. In 2013, there was a steady incline in the proportion of approximately four percent.
However
, it was accounting around, 40% in the
year
2014, and remained stable in the eventual year.

Further
scrutinizing the graph, as regards Sweden in 2011, the percentage of divorce rate was hovering between the range of 30 and 40%, whereas it
was surged
by around 4% in the subsequent
year
, and
started
following downward trend after 2012, which
was witnessed
to be almost 45% in the penultimate
year
,
before
reaching at the least ratio of 37%.
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