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special map of Islip town before and after

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Given are the maps of Islip's downtown, providing us information regarding its current situation and how it would be improved then. Overall, it is starkly apparent that many new practical infrastructure projects will be built there. When scrutinizing more rigorously, it can be inferred that Islip town has just one main road which crosses two raw of shops and markets. This road would turn into a circular dual carriageway, surrounding the city center and passing from the part that is the countryside right now. Only one raw of retails would be stayed constant during this construction, while the other raw would be changed into a new bus stop, commercial center, parking lot, and ultimately some new accommodations. All of these buildings would be located in the traffic-free zone in the north of the city. Turning into the housing area that is placed in the middle and south of the town now, they would be divided into two segments via passing the main route mentioned previously. The car park which is in the vicinity of residential place would be diminished and several new houses would spring up there. The school also where is on the left corner and southernmost of the Islip town will be renovated and become more spacious in the speculated map.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
Given
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are
 the maps of Possible spelling mistake found.SlipISIPI slipIs lip
Islip
's downtown, providing us information regarding its This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :contemporarymodern
current
 situation and how it would be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorated
improved
 then.

Overall
, it is starkly
 apparent that This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
 practical infrastructure projects will be built
 there.

When scrutinizing more rigorously
, it can be inferred
 that Possible spelling mistake found.SlipISIPI slipIs lip
Islip
 town has This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 one main road which crosses two raw of shops and markets. This road would turn into a circular dual carriageway, surrounding the city center and passing from the part that is
 the countryside right This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
Only
 one raw of retails would be stayed
 constant during this construction, while the other raw would be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
 into a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
 bus This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :terminateceasediscontinue
stop
, commercial center, parking lot, and ultimately
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
 accommodations. All of these buildings would be located
 in the traffic-free zone in the north of the city.

Turning into the housing area that is placed
 in the middle and south of the town This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
, they would be divided
 into two segments via passing the main route mentioned previously. The car park which is in the vicinity of residential place would be diminished
 and several You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residences
houses
 would spring up there. The school also
 where is on the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 corner and southernmost of the Possible spelling mistake found.SlipISIPI slipIs lip
Islip
 town will be renovated
 and become more spacious in the speculated map. 