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Graph of unemployment rate and people leaving Ireland

Graph of unemployment rate and people leaving Ireland kbpLR

The graph illustrates information about the proportion of unemployment in Ireland and the population who left this country between 1988 and 2008. It is clear that both rates are decreased in the given period of time. The jobless population rapidly declined from 17% to 13% in the first two years. Then increased to its temporal peak at 15% in 1992, when surprisingly the number of emigrants met its temporal minimum at 35000 people per year. In the following 8 years, the quantity of unemployed persons is decreased to 5%. Then, it started a gradual rising to 6% in the end of the examined period. At the same time, a great portion of people left the country until 1992. It is shown that in the following two years people are more tend to immigrate. Then, a mild decreasing trend can be seen until 2002, when just 25 thousand people emigrated from the country annually. But finally, the immigration to other countries boomed up to 50000 person-per-year by 2008.

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