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Graph of unemployment rate and people leaving Ireland

Graph of unemployment rate and people leaving Ireland kbpLR
The graph illustrates information about the proportion of unemployment in Ireland and the population who left this country between 1988 and 2008. It is clear that both rates are decreased in the given period of time. The jobless population rapidly declined from 17% to 13% in the first two years. Then increased to its temporal peak at 15% in 1992, when surprisingly the number of emigrants met its temporal minimum at 35000 people per year. In the following 8 years, the quantity of unemployed persons is decreased to 5%. Then, it started a gradual rising to 6% in the end of the examined period. At the same time, a great portion of people left the country until 1992. It is shown that in the following two years people are more tend to immigrate. Then, a mild decreasing trend can be seen until 2002, when just 25 thousand people emigrated from the country annually. But finally, the immigration to other countries boomed up to 50000 person-per-year by 2008.
The graph illustrates information about the proportion of unemployment in Ireland and the population who
left
this
country
between 1988 and 2008.

It is
clear
that both rates
are decreased
in the
given
period of time.

The jobless population
rapidly
declined from 17% to 13% in the
first
two years. Then increased to its temporal peak at 15% in 1992, when
surprisingly
the number of emigrants met its temporal minimum at 35000
people
per
year
. In the following 8 years, the quantity of unemployed persons
is decreased
to 5%. Then, it
started
a gradual rising to 6% in the
end
of the examined period.

At the same time, a great portion of
people
left
the
country
until 1992. It
is shown
that in the following two years
people
are more tend to immigrate. Then, a mild decreasing trend can be
seen
until 2002, when
just
25 thousand
people
emigrated from the
country
annually
.
But
finally
, the immigration to other
countries
boomed up to 50000 person-per-year by 2008.
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