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The graph illustrates the number of electrical appliances used in household over a century. Overall trend of images utilising of washing machines, refrigerator and vacuum cleaner has increased by huge amounts in span of 100 years. In 1920 the lifestyle shows washing machine and vacuum cleaner has far more popularity than refrigerator. During 1940 all the appliance showed similar popularity in household. But over the course of time refrigerator has managed the gain its importance in household over the other two which is clearly reflected at 1960. Refrigerator is marked to be one the most important household electrical appliance as by 1980 every household was equipped with it. Though not remaining behind was vacuum cleaner which achieved the same feet as former by 2000. Washing machine initially had the largest share but did not show appreciable growth for being fitted in household. Overall there has always been increase use of electrical appliances in household except only the decline in use of washing machine for year 1980.
The graph illustrates the number of electrical
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appliances
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used
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utilising
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machines
,
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refrigerator
and vacuum cleaner has increased by huge amounts in span of 100 years.

In 1920 the lifestyle
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shows
washing
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machine
and vacuum cleaner has far more popularity than
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refrigerator
. During 1940 all the
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appliance
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showed
similar popularity in
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household
.
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over the course of time
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refrigerator
has managed the gain its importance in
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household
over the other two which is
clearly
reflected at 1960.
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Refrigerator
is marked
to be
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one
the most
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important
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household
electrical
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appliance
as by 1980 every
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household
was equipped
with it. Though not remaining behind was vacuum cleaner which achieved the same feet as former by 2000. Washing
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machine
initially
had the largest share
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but
did not
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show
appreciable growth for
being fitted
in household.

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use
of electrical
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appliances
in
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household
except
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only
the decline in
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use
of washing
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machine
for year 1980.

IELTS academic graph of household electrical appliances

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3 paragraphs
166 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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