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Write a report of 150 words in 20 minutes describing the information in the table regarding modes of transport in Wales, 1985 and 2005.

Write a report of 150 words in 20 minutes describing the information in the table regarding modes of transport in Wales, 1985 and 2005. 0pYLl

The given table illustrates the average distances in terms of different modes of transports that people in Wales used in 1985 and 2005. It is clear that car had the greatest distances for both categories, which is in stark contrast with taxi. Furthermore, all the listed transportations witnessed a significant rise in the number of miles, except for walking, bicycle and local bus. To be specific, not only in 1985, but the average distance of car was also the highest in 2005, which is quoted by 3, 199 and 4, 806 thousand of miles respectively. Besides, the figure for miles traveled by coach, train and taxi both grew considerably between 1985 and 2005. Although taxi was the least popular means of transports in Wales, there was a sharp increase from 13 to 42 in its total number of miles. Contrary to the former, there was a fall in the distances of three transportations namely walking, bicycle and local bus. In 1985, the Welsh walked by 255 thousand of miles, after which this figure decreased slightly to 237 thousand of miles in 2005. Bicycle, which followed the same patterns, fell from 51 to 41 thousand of miles over the period shown. In comparison to walking and bicycle, local bus is the one that had the biggest downward trend, dropped nearly a half, from 429 to 274 thousand of miles.

The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 table illustrates the average You use this word too often, consider replacing it withspanareastretchspaceorbitgap
distances
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different
 modes of transports that This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 in Wales This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 in 1985 and 2005.

It is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 that car had the greatest You use this word too often, consider replacing it withspanareastretchspaceorbitgap
distances
 for both categories, which is in stark contrast with taxi. Furthermore
, all the listed transportations witnessed a significant rise in the number of miles, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :with the exception of
except for
 walking, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbike
bicycle
 and local bus.

To be specific, not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 in 1985, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 the average You use this word too often, consider replacing it withspanareastretchspaceorbitgap
distance
 of car was also
 the highest in 2005, which is quoted
 by 3, 199 and 4, 806 thousand of miles respectively
. Besides
, the figure for miles traveled by coach, train and taxi both grew considerably
 between 1985 and 2005. Although taxi was the least popular means of transports in Wales, there was a sharp increase from 13 to 42 in its total number of miles.

Contrary to the former, there was a fall in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withspanareastretchspaceorbitgap
distances
 of three transportations namely
 walking, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbike
bicycle
 and local bus. In 1985, the Welsh walked by 255 thousand of miles, after which this figure decreased slightly
 to 237 thousand of miles in 2005. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbike
Bicycle
, which followed the same patterns, fell from 51 to 41 thousand of miles over the period shown. In comparison
 to walking and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbike
bicycle
, local bus is the one that had the biggest downward trend, dropped nearly
 a half, from 429 to 274 thousand of miles. 