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The graphs below show the Percentage of household energy used and the amount of greenhouse gases produced in Australia. Summarise the making competition information where relevant

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IELTS academic The graphs below show the Percentage of household energy used and the amount of greenhouse gases produced in Australia. Summarise the making competition information where relevant

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