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The chart below shows the total number of telephone calls.

The chart below shows the total number of telephone calls. ENjXD

The UK total minutes of telephone calls are classified into three types between 1995 and 2002 which it is shown in the given chart. In 1995 local-fixed line was by far the most popular of that two others, with just over 70 minutes(billions). National and international-fixed line were also used, but much less significantly to just below 40 minutes(billions), while mobiles did not seem to be popular. (About 5 minutes(billions)) However, during seven years, although the usage of local phone had an increased in 1999, in 2002 it fell to the same range as 1995. While the usage of mobiles raised dramatically, with about 45 minutes(billions). The use of national and international calls, on the other hand, grew steadily from 38 minutes(billions) to just over 60 minutes(billions), but between 2001 to 2002 it was much less noticeably.

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 into three types between 1995 and 2002 which it is shown
 in the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
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fixed
 line was by far the most popular of that two others, with This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 over 70 minutes(billions). National and international-This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :rectified
fixed
 line were also
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used
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but
 much less significantly
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just
 below 40 minutes(billions), while mobiles did not seem to be popular. (About 5 minutes(billions))

However
, during seven years, although the usage of local phone had an increased in 1999, in 2002 it fell to the same range as 1995. While the usage of mobiles raised dramatically
, with about 45 minutes(billions).

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use
 of national and international calls, on the other hand
, grew steadily
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just
 over 60 minutes(billions), This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
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between 2001 to 2002
 it was much less noticeably
. 