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An increasing number of people in the world, necessity for accomadation is growing. Some people prefer to rent for living, but in my opinion, this is a negative situation. I will illuminate in this essay all negative and harmful aspects.

An increasing number of people in the world, necessity for accomadation is growing. Some people prefer to rent for living, but in my opinion, this is a negative situation. I will illuminate in this essay all negative and harmful aspects. 0pYJq
One serious problem is economic. When you live rental place you should pay monthly. Imagine, if you didn't have a permanent workplace, you would have some dangerous issues with owner house. For example, when i was a student, I lived rental apartment. Our houselady and neighbours spoke disparagingly with us. I remember, that days i really wanted to have my own home. In other words, you live regularly pressure and stress in this position. As a result, you can't achive success your work or study and you encounter with lack of money. Another issue is that, one day we all get elder. I believe that, everyone want to live their own home, when they are old age. Especially, our uzbek people. We have a proverb depends on this condition: "East or West, home is best". Moreover, nowadays mojority of people move for studying and working other countries and cities. However, they try to come their own home. In conclution, although renting has become more essential for people, it has brought about too many problems for this to be considered a positive trend.
One serious problem is economic.
When
you
live
rental place you should pay monthly. Imagine, if you didn't have a permanent workplace, you would have
some
dangerous
issues with owner
house
.
For example
, when
i
was a student, I
lived
rental apartment. Our
houselady
and
neighbours
spoke
disparagingly
with us. I remember, that days
i
really
wanted to have my
own
home.
In other words
, you
live
regularly
pressure and
stress
in this position.
As a result
, you can'
t achive
success your work or study and you encounter with lack of money.

Another issue is that, one day we all
get
elder. I believe that, everyone
want
to
live
their
own
home, when they are
old
age.
Especially
, our
uzbek
people
. We have a proverb depends on this condition:
"
East or West, home is best
"
.
Moreover
, nowadays
mojority
of
people
move
for studying and working other countries and cities.
However
, they try to
come
their
own
home.

In
conclution
, although renting has become more essential for
people
, it has brought about too
many
problems for this to
be considered
a
positive
trend.
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IELTS academic An increasing number of people in the world, necessity for accomadation is growing. Some people prefer to rent for living, but in my opinion, this is a negative situation. I will illuminate in this essay all negative and harmful aspects.

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  American English
3 paragraphs
182 words
6.0
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