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graph below shows the monthly income of 3 british companies

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the line graph demonstrates the information about the monthly revenue of 3 british companies namely Acme sports cars, Branson Motors and Curtis Cars Mart for the year 2000. overall, It can be seen that, the sale of Acme sports cars decreased over period given while for the Branson Motors and Curtis Car Mart, it rose. At the start of the period, Acme sports earned the highest profit among all 3 companies.
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