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Number and percentage of international of migrants from 2000 to 2017.

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The bar chart illustrate all put number of international migrants in four countries ( USA, Russia, Germany and India ) in 17 years from 2000 to 2017. The table gives information about proportion of migrants in the population in all four countries in 2017. Overall, the number of migrants in USA increased at the end of the period unlike that when started. While Russia and India had slight a decline at the end of the period, nevertheless Germany had slight increase.
The bar chart illustrate all put number of international migrants in four countries
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USA, Russia, Germany and India
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in 17 years from 2000 to 2017. The table gives information about proportion of migrants in the population in all four countries in 2017.

Overall
, the number of migrants
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in USA
increased at the
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end
of the period unlike that when
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started
. While Russia and India had slight a decline at the
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end
of the period,
nevertheless
Germany had slight increase.
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