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Long - Term International migration, UK , 1999-2008

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The chart gives information about UK immigration, emigration and net migration between 1999 and 2008. Both immigration and emigration rates rose over the period shown, but the figures for immigration were significantly higher. Net migration peaked in 2004 and 2007. In 1999, over 450, 000 people came to live in the UK, while the number of people who emigrated stood at just under 300, 000. The figure for net migration was around 160, 000, and it remained at a similar level until 2003. From 1999 to 2004, the immigration rate rose by nearly 150, 000 people, but there was a much smaller rise in emigration. Net migration peaked at almost 250, 000 people in 2004. After 2004, the rate of immigration remained high, but the number of people emigrating fluctuated. Emigration fell suddenly in 2007, before peaking at about 420, 000 people in 2008. As a result, the net migration figure rose to around 240, 000 in 2007, but fell back to around 160, 000 in 2008
The chart gives information about UK
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immigration
, emigration and net
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migration
between 1999 and 2008.

Both
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immigration
and emigration rates rose over the period shown,
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but
the figures for
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immigration
were
significantly
higher. Net
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migration
peaked in 2004 and 2007.

In 1999, over 450, 000
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people
came to
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live
in the UK, while the number of
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people
who emigrated stood at
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just
under 300, 000. The figure for net
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migration
was around 160, 000, and it remained at a similar level until 2003. From 1999 to 2004, the
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immigration
rate rose by
nearly
150, 000
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people
,
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but
there was a much smaller rise in emigration. Net
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migration
peaked at almost 250, 000
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people
in 2004.

After 2004, the rate of
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immigration
remained high,
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but
the number of
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people
emigrating fluctuated. Emigration fell
suddenly
in 2007,
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before
peaking at about 420, 000
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people
in 2008.
As a result
, the net
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migration
figure rose to around 240, 000 in 2007,
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but
fell back to around 160, 000 in 2008
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IELTS academic Long - Term International migration, UK, 1999-2008

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166 words
6.5
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