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Given is the table illustrating the jobless do their habits in the UK in 1982.

Given is the table illustrating the jobless do their habits in the UK in 1982. 0lLA1

Given is the table illustrating the jobless do their habits in the UK in 1982. While women spent most of their time doing housework, men tended to hunt for a new job before noon. However, in the afternoon, they prefer watching TV. Out of the fourteen activities, Females spent the most frequent doing chores with approximately 50% in their morning time, 28% higher than did that in the afternoon. In the morning, shopping was the second choice for unemployed women, which stood at 26%. . Interestingly, the percentage of spending on job hunting was also highest with males, at 22%. By contrast, those who had been employed had largest time for the TV usage after lunch with 14%. When the gentlemen had time for themselves, they also used to go shopping, garden with 20% and 13% respectively. In the time surveyed, 2% was the percentage of time whom a large number of gentlemen did not need to drink water, 1% higher than women drank. The striking point is that jobless men oftens spent little time staying in bed, at just 1%. In addition, both staying in bed and playing sport were not women’s common work so they hadn’t in their schedule.

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