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The graph replicates a detail information about the worldwide water usage and a brief valuation about water consumption in two different countries named brazil and Democratic Republic of Congos To constitute the agriculture usage has skyrocketed more than 3x times from past 5 decades. on the other hand industrial consumption had a descent growth almost maintain the similar trend for three consecutive years. Brazil has a vast population compared to its competition country By having a deep look look at graph its clear. The the agriculture had consumed a humongous percentage not less than 3ooo km2. where as the the domestic use has a appreciatable track record ever since the past century it has maintained a stabilised growth, there are even situations where the growth was salve for consecutive decades which had an accelerated population Brazil has a incredible strength which was almost thirty times more compared to the Republic Congo although its not equipped with the same amount of irrigation land which seems to be pathetic. The worst part in regard to Brazil seems to be the average water get in used by its citizens was far away when compared to the Democratic Congo citizens the ration ca be given as 359: 8 cubic meters that is really huge.

The graph replicates a detail information about the worldwide water usage and a brief valuation about water consumption in two This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 countries named Possible spelling mistake found.Brazil
brazil
 and Democratic Republic of Possible spelling mistake found.Congo'sCongoCondosCongasBongos
Congos


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 the other hand industrial consumption had a descent growth almost maintain the similar trend for three consecutive years. Brazil has a vast population compared to its competition Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphcountry.country!country?country:country,country;
country


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look look
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 agriculture had consumed a humongous percentage not less than 3ooo km2. Did you mean "whereas"?whereas
where as
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the the
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use
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appreciatable
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 record ever since the past century it has maintained a Possible spelling mistake. 'stabilised' is British English.stabilized
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a
 incredible strength which was almost thirty times more compared to the Republic Congo although its not equipped with the same amount of irrigation land which seems to be pathetic. The worst part in regard to Brazil seems to be the average water This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
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used
 by its citizens was far away when compared to the Democratic Congo citizens the ration ca be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
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really
 huge. 