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The bar graph show the number of magz8nes sold by 5 different countries in 2005 to 2015 and prediction is also given 2025

The bar graph show the number of magz8nes sold by 5 different countries in 2005 to 2015 and prediction is also given 2025 K05VN
The assigned bar graph expound the information about the magazines sold by France, US, UK, Italy and Spain from 2005 to 2015 as well as predicted year 2025. To begin with, 40, 000s booklet was sold by France in 2005which had been slightly went down in 2015 about 37, 000s in 2015. It is supposed to buy 35, 000s individuals in 2025. However, in US, the readers of pamphlet was noticed near about 32, 000s in 2005 as well as 2015. It is estimated to 25, 000s in 2025. Moreover, the trend of buying magzines show a fluctuation in chunk in three given periods. Probing further, in Italy 15000 monograph sold in 2005. Followed by, demand of book reviewers increased at 20, 000s lesspopular in 2025 near about 2000s. interestingly, popularity of magazine remained same in three periods about 5000 s correspondingly. Overall, it can clear from above graph that the highest number of magazines sold by France and least accounted by Spain in the given years.
The assigned bar graph expound the information about the magazines sold by France, US, UK, Italy and Spain from 2005 to 2015
as well
as predicted year 2025. To
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begin
with, 40, 000s booklet
was sold
by France in 2005which had been
slightly
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went
down in 2015 about 37, 000s in 2015. It
is supposed
to
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buy
35, 000s individuals in 2025.
However
, in US, the readers of pamphlet
was noticed
near about 32, 000s in 2005
as well
as 2015. It
is estimated
to 25, 000s in 2025.
Moreover
, the trend of buying
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magzines
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show
a fluctuation in chunk in three
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given
periods. Probing
further
, in Italy 15000 monograph sold in 2005. Followed by, demand of book reviewers increased at 20, 000s
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lesspopular
in 2025 near about 2000s.
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interestingly
, popularity of magazine remained same in three periods about 5000 s
correspondingly
.
Overall
, it can
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clear
from above graph that the highest number of magazines sold by France and least accounted by Spain in the
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given
years.
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