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From 2000 to 2020, the graph and chart above show data and forecast on means of transportation and CO2 emissions in England and Wales.

From 2000 to 2020, the graph and chart above show data and forecast on means of transportation and CO2 emissions in England and Wales. jbxlM
From 2000 to 2020, the graph and chart above show data and forecast on means of transportation and CO2 emissions in England and Wales. Overall, it is clear that CO2 emissions became the main factor in 2000 and have increased dramatically over the last 20 years. Furthermore, between 2000 and 2020, the number of automobiles increased considerably. Looking at the graph more closely, we can see that vehicle emissions were the most noticeable at 20 tons, whereas bus emissions were practically half that at 9 tons. Furthermore, vans and trucks released the same amount of emissions, at 13 and 15 tons, respectively. CO2 emissions from cars and trucks have increased dramatically during the last 20 years. In the year 2020, they released 26 tons and 23 tons. The quantity of emissions from buses, on the other hand, remained steady, while that from vans climbed slightly to 15 tons. As can be seen from the line graph, the total number of modes of transportation in 2000 was approximately 20 million. Furthermore, it reached 55 million by 2020, indicating that it is still on the rise.
From 2000 to 2020, the graph and chart above
show
data and forecast on means of transportation and CO2
emissions
in England and Wales.

Overall
, it is
clear
that CO2
emissions
became the main factor in 2000 and have increased
dramatically
over the last 20 years.
Furthermore
, between 2000 and 2020, the number of automobiles increased
considerably
.

Looking at the graph more
closely
, we can
see
that vehicle
emissions
were the most noticeable at 20 tons, whereas bus
emissions
were
practically
half that at 9 tons.
Furthermore
, vans and trucks released the same amount of
emissions
, at 13 and 15 tons,
respectively
. CO2
emissions
from cars and trucks have increased
dramatically
during the last 20 years. In the year 2020, they released 26 tons and 23 tons. The quantity of
emissions
from buses,
on the other hand
, remained steady, while that from vans climbed
slightly
to 15 tons.

As can be
seen
from the line graph, the total number of modes of transportation in 2000 was approximately 20 million.
Furthermore
, it reached 55 million by 2020, indicating that it is
still
on the rise.
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