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Frequency of people going to fast food restaurant

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The bar chart gives an indication of the frequency people ate in fast food restaurants in the USA between 2003 and 2013. Overall the majority of the population goes to fast food restaurant once a week or a few times a month. A decreasing trend could also be observed over the 10-year period as the percentage of the population going more frequently decreases. In 2013, there were least amount of people dining in a daily basis at around 2. 5%, with a relatively higher proportion coming a few times annually or weekly at approximately 15% and 33% of the people fall in the category of going once or twice a month. Furthermore, a similar trend is evident for the data given in 2003 and 2006. Peaking in the frequency of once per week at 31% and 33% respectively. Moreover, a decline in the frequency people go to fast food places can be seen over the years, with 4% going everyday in 2003 and at only 2. 5% in 2006 and 2013. Similarly, more people eat out a few times a year as high as 15% in 2013 but only 12% in 2003.
The bar chart gives an indication of the frequency
people
ate in
fast
food restaurants in the USA between 2003 and 2013.

Overall
the majority of the population goes to
fast
food restaurant once a week or a few times a month. A decreasing trend could
also
be observed
over the 10-year period as the percentage of the population going more
frequently
decreases.

In 2013, there were
least
amount of
people
dining in a daily basis at around 2. 5%, with a
relatively
higher proportion coming a few times
annually
or weekly at approximately 15% and 33% of the
people
fall in the category of going once or twice a month.

Furthermore
, a similar trend is evident for the data
given
in 2003 and 2006. Peaking in the frequency of once per week at 31% and 33%
respectively
.
Moreover
, a decline in the frequency
people
go to
fast
food places can be
seen
over the years, with 4% going everyday in 2003 and at
only
2. 5% in 2006 and 2013.
Similarly
, more
people
eat out a few times a year as high as 15% in 2013
but
only
12% in 2003.
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