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The below show the graph represent the parcentage of adult of the different age group in USA used th internet between 2003 and 2006 .

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The given column graph represents the ratio of adults of the different age groups who used the internet between 2003 and 2006 in the USA. After analyzing the chart, it can be seen clearly that the high proportion of using the internet in 16-24 age was 100% in 2005. However, 905 in 2006. While 80% using the internet in 2003 and 2004 by youngers. moving further to the rest of the information in the age of 25-44groups, there was a gradual growth in the percentage from 50 to 80% between 2003 and 2006. There was similar in the age group of 45-54, rising from 60% in 2003, 80% in 2006. And, other two groups are minor fluctuation the all over trend upward. Overall, an adult with 16-54 group similar usage the internet. thw
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, there was a gradual growth in the percentage from 50 to 80% between 2003 and 2006. There was similar in the
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age
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of 45-54, rising from 60% in 2003, 80% in 2006. And, other two
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are minor fluctuation the all over trend upward.

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similar usage the internet.
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IELTS academic The below show the graph represent the parcentage of adult of the different age group in USA used th internet between 2003 and 2006.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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