Search
Tools
Listening
Reading
1. Academic
2. General
Writing
1. IELTSWriting Checker
2. IELTS Writing Samples
Speaking

Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.

Japan and Malaysia spendings

Japan and Malaysia spendings 2lAeJ

The two pie charts illustrate the amount of spending money for five categories of household in Japan and Malaysia in the year 2010. Overall, Japan spent the most money on goods and services, while housing was the most expendable sector of household in Malaysia. In 2010, the lowest amount of money was spent in the health care in both states. In all types of household consumption there was minimal difference between two countries. In Japan the other goods and services was the most expensive sector, which comprised 29% of total spending compared to Malaysia, which spent only 26%. In both countries food came as second priority with 24% and 27% of total household costs. However, the food took the last place on household expenditure for Japan and Malaysia comprising 3% and 6% of the all spending. In spite of the fact that there was not maximal difference between countries in four categories, the distinction of money for the food was 10%.

The two pie charts illustrate the amount of spending You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsalarywagewealthpaybillcash
money
 for five categories of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withordinaryeveryday
household
 in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withglazevarnishlacquerstaincoating
Japan
 and Malaysia in the year 2010.

Overall
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withglazevarnishlacquerstaincoating
Japan
 spent the most You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsalarywagewealthpaybillcash
money
 on This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :productscommoditiesmerchandises
goods
 and services, while housing was the most expendable sector of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withordinaryeveryday
household
 in Malaysia. In 2010, the lowest amount of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsalarywagewealthpaybillcash
money
was spent
 in the health care in both states. In all types of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withordinaryeveryday
household
 consumption there was minimal difference between two countries.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
In
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withglazevarnishlacquerstaincoating
Japan
 the other This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :productscommoditiesmerchandises
goods
 and services was the most expensive sector, which comprised 29% of total spending compared to Malaysia, which spent This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 26%. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
In
 both Apostrophe might be missing. Did you mean "countries'" or "country's"?countries'country's
countries
 food came as second priority with 24% and 27% of total You use this word too often, consider replacing it withordinaryeveryday
household
 costs.

However
, the food took the last place on You use this word too often, consider replacing it withordinaryeveryday
household
 expenditure for You use this word too often, consider replacing it withglazevarnishlacquerstaincoating
Japan
 and Malaysia comprising 3% and 6% of the all spending. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:notwithstanding
In spite of
 the fact that there was not maximal difference between countries in four categories, the distinction of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsalarywagewealthpaybillcash
money
 for the food was 10%. 