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The pie charts above show a comparison of kinds of energy production in a European country in 1995 and 2005.

The pie charts above show a comparison of kinds of energy production in a European country in 1995 and 2005. PWb1g
The two pie charts illustrates the proportion of five types of energy production in France in 1995 and 2005. Overall, in both years, the most significant sources of energy were gas and coal which together accounted for over half of the producing energy in France. In the year 1995 other source of energy, it accounted for 4. 90% and experienced a rise of 9. 10% in the year 2005. As regards, energy produced by coal comprised of 29. 80% in the first year whereas this showed a slight increase of nearly 1% to 30. 09% in 2005. The initial figure for nuclear was 6. 40% and an incline of 10. 10% was generated. In addition to the remaining methods of producing energy, petrol energy is the year 1995, which had the ratio of 29. 22% in the year 2005. Furthermore, gas energy acquired 29. 63% in the year 1995, which has a minimum growth of 30. 31% with difference of merely 1% observed at the end of the year 2005.
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production in France in 1995 and 2005.
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, in both years, the most significant sources of
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gas and coal which together accounted for over half of the producing
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in France. In the
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1995 other source of
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, it accounted for 4. 90% and experienced a rise of 9. 10% in the
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2005. As regards,
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produced by coal comprised of 29. 80% in the
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1% to 30. 09% in 2005. The initial figure for nuclear was 6. 40% and an incline of 10. 10%
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, petrol
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is the
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1995, which had the ratio of 29. 22% in the
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2005.
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, gas
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acquired 29. 63% in the
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1995, which has a minimum growth of 30. 31% with difference of
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2005.
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IELTS academic The pie charts above show a comparison of kinds of energy production in a European country in 1995 and 2005.

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