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THE PICTURE BELOW SHOWS HOW TOMATO KETCHUP IS BEING PRODUCED

THE PICTURE BELOW SHOWS HOW TOMATO KETCHUP IS BEING PRODUCED Ba81d

The diagram illustrates the various stages involve in making ketchup of tomato. Overall, the whole process is a cycle which can be divided into 11 stages. It begins with harvest tomatoes and finishes in the delivery of the final product. Firstly of all, having harvested, the famers sorted good and bad tomatoes for purpose difference, following this the tomatoes were sent to factory in which remove stalk, seed and skin for crushing in container. Before decoction process, the liquid was then added with salt, sugar and vinegar. Having left about 2 hours, the process involved in pouring into bottles and labeling. After this step, to ensure goods, the ketchup was managed in quality control and transported to supermarket. Tomato ketchup was used with fires and hamburgers

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 with harvest tomatoes and finishes in the delivery of the final product.

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