Search
Vocabularying
Listening
Reading
1. Academic
2. General
Writing
1. IELTSWriting Checker
2. IELTS Writing Samples
Speaking

Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.

The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London.

he graph gives information about the number of passengers who use the metro in London in a specific day. Overall, it can be seen that passengers number fluctuates during the day. It is highest at 8 AM and 18: 30 PM, and the lowest at 6 AM and 4 PM. Looking at the graph in more details, the least number of travellers use the metro at 6 AM. This figure increases sharply to a pick of 400 passengers 8 AM, which is the greatest travellers number on the entire day. After that, it fell significantly to nearly 155 passengers. Then, it fluctuats till hit a low of 100 at 4 PM, which the lowest point on the graph. Following this, it rise to 380 at 6 PM. Then, this number fluctuates till reach 130. This means that more people use underground train between 6 and 8 AM, and from 16 and 7 PM.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter.He
he
The pronoun ‘he’ is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: “graphs”, “graphed”.graphsgraphed
graph
 gives information about the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcustomerfaretouristcommuterpatrontraveler
passengers
 who This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 the metro in London in a specific day.

Overall
, it can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcustomerfaretouristcommuterpatrontraveler
passengers
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 fluctuates during the day. It is highest at 8 AM and 18: 30 PM, and the lowest at 6 AM and 4 PM.

Looking at the graph in more This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :particulars
details
, the least You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 of Possible spelling mistake. ‘travellers’ is British English.travelers
travellers
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 the metro at 6 AM. This figure increases sharply
 to a pick of 400 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcustomerfaretouristcommuterpatrontraveler
passengers
 8 AM, which is the greatest Possible spelling mistake. ‘travellers’ is British English.travelers
travellers
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 on the entire day. After that, it fell significantly
 to nearly
 155 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcustomerfaretouristcommuterpatrontraveler
passengers
. Then, it Possible spelling mistake found.fluctuatefluctuates
fluctuats
 till hit a low of 100 at 4 PM, which the lowest point on the graph. Following this, it After ‘it’, use the third-person verb form “rises”.rises
rise
 to 380 at 6 PM. Then, this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 fluctuates till reach 130. This means that more This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 underground train between 6 and 8 AM, and from 16 and 7 PM. 