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The diagram illustrates the process of a transaction banking service between the local bank and the customer’s home bank through an ATM,

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The diagram illustrates the process of a transaction banking service between the local bank and the customer’s home bank through an ATM, which allows a customer to withdraw some money, in five stages beginning with entering the card and PIN, ending with the establishing trading partnership between the two banks. At the first stage, the customer has to access the ATM by his or her card and type the PIN to operate the service. Subsequently, a message from the local bank is sent to Mr. Smith’s bank, the bank in the hometown of the customer, via network to confirm if the account of the customer can afford that money and in contrast. Once Mr. Smith’s bank has received the message, it will immediately check the balance because if the fund in the client’s account is not available, the service will be terminated. After ensuring that the fund is adequate, the money will be minus to the customer’s account. After that, it will reply to the bank which makes a request. And then the customer can take out the cash required. Finally, the two banks will co-operate in terms of finance and services that banks offer to serve the client.

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some
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customer
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bank
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check
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service
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. After ensuring that the fund is adequate, the money will be minus to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclientconsumerpatronpurchaser
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bank
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 a request. And then the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclientconsumerpatronpurchaser
customer
 can take out the cash required. Finally
, the two You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfundtreasurystorestock
banks
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