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The maps show the coastal village of Aberham in 1995 and now.

The maps show the coastal village of Aberham in 1995 and now. PRd6J
The two maps below depict the evolution of a seaside village from 1995 to the current day. As is evident from the picture, after the increases in accommodation and tourist facilities, the village experienced significant change. Green spaces, fishing activities, and farming have all suffered as a result of these infrastructural improvements. It is clear that farmlands have been transformed into tourism attractions. In particular, a dock for fishing boats was redesigned for yachts in the south, while a local fish market was removed to make space for new condominium towers. In addition, farms and woodland that existed on the village's north eastern edge in 1995 have been destroyed, and a golf course and tennis court have been built. With regard to the village’s center, the terrain has been significantly urbanized. Specifically, the road, which formerly ran north-south, has now been expanded to the west. To accommodate more visitors, holiday houses were created on the site of a former public park, besides, residences and hotels were also expanded. Food and beverage facilities have also been upgraded as well by replacing sport houses with restaurants while keeping the coffee shops.
The two maps below depict the evolution of a seaside village from 1995 to the
current
day.

As is evident from the picture, after the increases in accommodation and tourist facilities, the village experienced significant
change
. Green spaces, fishing activities, and farming have all suffered
as a result
of these infrastructural improvements.

It is
clear
that farmlands have
been transformed
into tourism attractions.
In particular
, a dock for fishing boats
was redesigned
for yachts in the south, while a local fish market
was removed
to
make
space for new condominium towers.
In addition
, farms and woodland that existed on the village's
north eastern
edge in 1995 have been
destroyed
, and a golf course and tennis court have
been built
.

With regard to the village’s center, the terrain has been
significantly
urbanized.
Specifically
, the road, which
formerly
ran north-south, has
now
been expanded
to the west. To accommodate more visitors, holiday
houses
were created
on the site of a former public park,
besides
, residences and hotels were
also
expanded. Food and beverage facilities have
also
been upgraded
as well
by replacing sport
houses
with restaurants while keeping the coffee shops.
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