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Producing chocolate from cacao tree

Producing chocolate from cacao tree 73Oj6

The illustration gives information about the process of making a liquid chocolate. In general, the method, which is used to produce chocolate, is composed of different stages, divided between growing the cacao in nature, some operation in the wild, and transportation to the factory for further processing. First of all, the cacao trees, which contain the pods, are planted in areas such as: South America, Africa and Indonesia, then these pods are harvested to obtain white beans of cacao. After that, the beans are fermented and spread in the sun to dry, and large sacks are used to put them for packaging. The bags are transported to the factory by a train or lorry. In the factory, the beans are roasted at around 350 degrees C, and using a certain machine, the outer shell is removed by crushing these beans. Another equipment is used to press the inner pat, which was produced from the shell, to make the liquid chocolate.

The illustration gives information about the process of making a liquid chocolate.

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, the method, which is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to produce chocolate, is composed
 of This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 stages, divided between growing the cacao in nature, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 operation in the wild, and transportation to the factory for further
 processing.

This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".First
First of all
, the cacao trees, which contain the pods, are planted
 in areas such as: South America, Africa and Indonesia, then these pods are harvested
 to obtain white You use this word too often, consider replacing it withkernelgrainberry
beans
 of cacao. After that, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withkernelgrainberry
beans
are fermented
 and spread in the sun to dry, and large sacks are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to put them for packaging.

The bags are transported
 to the factory by a train or lorry. In the factory, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withkernelgrainberry
beans
are roasted
 at around 350 degrees C, and using a certain machine, the outer shell is removed
 by crushing these You use this word too often, consider replacing it withkernelgrainberry
beans
. Another equipment is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to press the inner pat, which was produced
 from the shell, to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 the liquid chocolate. 