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female unemployment rates in each country of the UK in 2013 and 2014.

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The bar chart illustrates the ratio of unemployed women in four countries of the UK in the year 2013 and 2014. It is clear that all the countries experienced slight decrease in the level of unemployment other than Scotland from 2013 to 2014. In 2013 6. 8 % or female in England were unemployed which was higher than that in the Wales, Scotland and Northern Ireland Where 6. 1 % and 5. 6 % respectively. In the year 2014 unemployment rates among female dropped by 0. 2 % and 0. 4 % in England and Wales compared to the previous year. At the same time it increased to 0. 7 percentage in Scotland and it became the most female unemployed country in 2014, in the meantime least employment % was observed in the Northern Ireland
The bar chart illustrates the ratio of unemployed women in four countries of the UK in the year 2013 and 2014.

It is
clear
that all the countries experienced slight decrease in the level of unemployment other than Scotland from 2013 to 2014.

In 2013 6. 8 % or female in England
were unemployed
which was higher than that in the Wales, Scotland and Northern Ireland Where 6. 1 % and 5. 6 %
respectively
.

In the year 2014 unemployment rates among female dropped by 0. 2 % and 0. 4 % in England and Wales compared to the previous year. At the same time it increased to 0. 7 percentage in Scotland and it became the most female unemployed country in 2014, in the meantime least employment %
was observed
in the Northern Ireland
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IELTS academic female unemployment rates in each country of the UK in 2013 and 2014.

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