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The given layout of maps describe the current situation of a civic centre and also the future plan of the centre.

The given layout of maps describe the current situation of a civic centre and also the future plan of the centre. joRwL
The given layout of maps describe the current situation of a civic centre and also the future plan of the centre. Overall, it is clearly seen that the vast area of car park will be demolished in the future and many underground buildings will take place in the near future in the civic centre. To commence with the current city civic centre, on the both side there are two streets, High street on the left and Smith Street on the right. Moreover, in the centre, both the northern corner has car parking and in the middle of the centre there is a cinema hall. In addition, on the southern part of the centre, there is an exhibition in the bottom left-hand corner, whereas on the right side of exhibition, there is ouncil office situated and beside the offices, a big town hall is there. On the south-east corner there is one shopping centre and library over there. In regard to the future civic centre, the old car park will be substituted by new cafe and restaurants. Cinema hall will be as it is in the same location, whereas the library and the council offices will be moved to the previous location of exhibition. Moreover, the car park will be shifted to the underground of civic centre. Town Hall will be constructed to the new place at the middle of the Civic centre. In addition, exhibition will be moved to the place where there is a library. Shopping Centre will remain at the same location.
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given
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describe
the
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current
situation of a
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civic
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centre
and
also
the
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future
plan of the
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centre
.

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, it is
clearly
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seen
that the vast area of
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car
park will
be demolished
in the
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future
and
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many
underground buildings will take place in the near
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future
in the
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civic
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centre
.

To commence with the
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current
city
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civic
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centre
, on the both side there are two streets, High street on the
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left
and Smith Street on the right.
Moreover
, in the
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centre
, both the northern corner has
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car
parking and in the middle of the
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centre
there is a cinema
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hall
.
In addition
, on the southern part of the
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centre
, there is an exhibition in the bottom
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left
-hand corner, whereas on the right side of exhibition, there is
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ouncil
office situated and beside the offices, a
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big
town
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hall
is there. On the south-east corner there is one shopping
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centre
and library over there.

In regard to the
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future
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civic
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centre
, the
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old
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car
park will
be substituted
by new
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cafe
and restaurants. Cinema
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hall
will be as it is in the same location, whereas the library and the council offices will be
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moved
to the previous location of exhibition.
Moreover
, the
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car
park will
be shifted
to the underground of
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civic
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centre
. Town
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Hall
will
be constructed
to the new place at the middle of the
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Civic
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centre
.
In addition
, exhibition will be
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moved
to the place where there is a library. Shopping
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Centre
will remain at the same location.
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IELTS academic The given layout of maps describe the current situation of a civic centre and also the future plan of the centre.

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