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Now it is common to get married after thirties rather than younger age

Now it is common to get married after thirties rather than younger age gYY53
Gone are the days when people did marriage in there youn age however the table has turn and individuals like to do marrige above thrites due to financial and some other reasons. To my view it is negative development for both individuals and society. To begin with, this trend has popular because people want to set in there life before the marriage and want to spent the some quality of time with their life partner and want to make understanding between each other so that after marriage they will never face big problems. An example in America people prefer to do marriage after thirties age thus is fact because they want to earn money before the marriage. To do this phenomenon between their children become generation gap as consequences they always think about accordingly their ancient time but him or her children always think about new technology. Nevertheless, in past time people get married in their younger age as result they gave the birth to child at perfect time and and live happy life. And grown with their time as result no generation gap between parents and sons. To conclude, it would be sensible abundance to understand that to do marriage in younger age is appropriate idea for everyone. To my view people should give the preference to get married in suitable age for the future.
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IELTS academic Now it is common to get married after thirties rather than younger age

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