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female literacy rate and population growth

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The given graph illustrates the female literacy rate in comparison with population growth in certain countries over the course of 12 years, beginning from 1988. Overall, a negative correlation can be seen between the rate of literate women and the increase in population. Regarding the countries with a population growth rate of higher than 2. 9%, Afghanistan took the lead with a figure of 4. 5% for the rate of population expansion. Conversely, the country’s female literacy rate ranked lowest among the assessed countries, barely reaching the 10% mark. The Yemen Arab Rep. had the second-highest population increase rate at 3. 3% yet placed last for the percentage of literate women. Similarly, in Mali, Sudan and Pakistan, the female literacy rate was inversely proportional to population growth. Concerning the remaining countries, a reverse trend can be observed whereby an increase in the literacy rate of women was in line with a decrease in population growth. Colombia and Thailand, whose figures for female literacy rate took dominance over general results, registered a relatively low population expansion rate of 1. 8% and 1. 4%, respectively. Likewise, while Dominican Rep. , Jamaica and Sri Lanka had high rates of literate women, figures for population growth only ranged between 1. 2% and 1. 9%.
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of higher than 2. 9%, Afghanistan took the lead with a figure of 4. 5% for the
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. Colombia and Thailand, whose figures for
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took dominance over general results, registered a
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of 1. 8% and 1. 4%,
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ranged between 1. 2% and 1. 9%.
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IELTS academic female literacy rate and population growth

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