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Felixstone 1967 Felixstone 2001

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The maps describe alterations of Felixstone town over 34 years(1967-2001). Overall, over the given period of time Felixstone was converted into a modern city with all necessary facilities from a residential small town. One of the most important changes in Felixstone was started in northeast of the town were built several cottages and Farmland was transformed into a touristic residence including a hotel, swimming pool and tennis courts for entertainment. a private beach was organized in the southeast of Felixstone in 2001. The same place had been previously used as a market for fish sales. Parallel to the private beach there had been constructed a public beach. Next to the car park there were installed wind turbines for the supplement electiricity as there we can see entertaining places which demand electric power in the last map(2001). A hotel with car park was built in the south west side of the beach and earlier there were a small hotel without parking place in it. With the reducing the numbers of trees, the area of dunes enlarged a bit. A golf course, a cafe and shops in the north west were not under any transformation.
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Felixstone
town over 34 years(1967-2001).

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Felixstone
was converted
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small
town.

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important
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Felixstone
was
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started
in northeast of the town
were built
several cottages and Farmland
was transformed
into a touristic residence including a hotel, swimming pool and tennis courts for entertainment.
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a
private
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beach
was organized
in the southeast of
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Felixstone
in 2001. The same place had been previously
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used
as a market for fish sales. Parallel to the private
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beach
there had
been constructed
a public
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beach
.
Next
to the car park there
were installed
wind turbines for the supplement
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electiricity
as there we can
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see
entertaining places which demand electric power in the last map(2001).

A hotel with car park
was built
in the
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south west
side of the
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beach
and earlier there were a
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small
hotel without parking place in it. With the reducing the numbers of trees, the area of dunes enlarged a bit.

A golf course, a
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cafe
and shops in the
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north west
were not under any transformation.
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